That was truly beautiful. My favorite line was "he has that look again, the same look he had during dinner. The one I can’t quite make out. Or maybe I can, only I’m a bit scared to do it. Because what I see there is almost too big, too intense to really comprehend. Too much to take in." Really good job.
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Date: 2008-01-21 03:06 am (UTC)