ext_55931 ([identity profile] 0corona0.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] moongirl24 2008-02-03 12:20 am (UTC)

Very good fic! I like Justin-taking-care-of-Brian-with-cancer stories anyway, but this one's particularly great! I especially like the movie-scene. That is exactly how I imagine a perfect moment between them too!

One thing though: I kind of stumbled across Brian's 'Love you'. Well, I guess that's just because I find the idea of 510 being the first time so romantic ;), but I felt like you had already shown their love very clearly and very intensely and that you didn't need that further step anymore. But maybe that's just me. :)

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